Monday, April 04, 2005

4. A Place to Consider Apocalypse

A Place to Consider Apocalypse

Just before the power went, the yard
went blue, the light held on them.
One by one, the shuttings off; the VCR
stopped blinking; maybe the sounds
from other rooms also quieted, motors
unsounding their loose purrs to listen.
And then the trees: lifted or pushed
over, roots ungripping the wet earth.
If I were watching, I would have thought
of violence, of a child pulled off
carpet by his collar. Storms grown up
inside, the slow eye turned toward you.
It is worse elsewhere, of course.
The way you told it, the way you claimed
a dense quiet: settled and unsettling...
how you looked and saw only light
and then only darkness. You looked
outward, then inward for days.

(not so much, this one. sigh.)

3 Comments:

Blogger br!an said...

is the (last line) part of the poem?

this one is my favorite so far.

i love it when the power goes out... except that it usually means that it's not coming back for a while... and light is underrated.

Tuesday, April 05, 2005 12:30:00 AM  
Blogger Savannah said...

I loved the last few lines.

What do you mean, "not so much,this one"?

Tuesday, April 05, 2005 7:48:00 PM  
Blogger AnotherDistraction. said...

hi. You are totoally gonna maybe be like "this girl is mega messed up" but since i really think this is the Billy.M that created 'talking in the dark' ill write this and say i went to start a blog. and i wanted to use talkinginthedark as my blog thing. but alas it was taken. so in my spite and anger i looked up who stole my grand idea of using the book title..and found out it was you..the person who made the book. so i just got a little chuckle out of it and was liek "u kno what..whatever..ill creep him out and tag him by saying i really loved your book." expecially the quote kinda thing
You asked about life, i read you a poem
You asked about love, i read you another.
(yeah..i just had to tag you. just for the hell of it. lol. srys if ur like "umm..ooooook". later =D)

Tuesday, April 05, 2005 11:19:00 PM  

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